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[[Old] Mr.Beanitato #1]

Funny and short. Yep, that's a funny short. : )

Thanks to previous reviews, you should know the two main flaws of this movie: first, the name mr. Bean is kind of taken, and second, the beans only looked like beans if you knew they were beans. Maybe you could just look for other types of beans, which are instantly recognizable as beans.
The movie is still funny, no matter the beans that aren't recognizable as beans but are beans indeed.

PenguinLink responds:

Thanks! Yeah, I really think I should change the name and the drawings of the "Beans". Thanks for the review.

[[Old] Whitob Ep.1]

A good idea, resulting in a nice flash.

This movie had a nice idea behind it. That was also the main reason why I liked it. Graphics were okay -could use more moving parts, like making the blobs...err...blob when they bounce-, as was the sound. The violence and humor were okay too. But the style is good. Keep it up!

PenguinLink responds:

Thanks alot. Yeah, I agree that the blobs need more movement. I'll see into it once I start working on Episode 2. Thanks for the review.

[The Road pt 1]

It's a horror without the horror?

You said that the real horror will begin in part two. I could almost live with that. Almost, as the file is pretty small, so I guess you'could've waited and finish 'part two', and just make one bigger movie with that. Then it'll at least have the horror. And that's what you want people to watch your movie for, right?

You also said you didn't want to add music, to make it feel more like a horror. But when you'll think about it, every horror as music. You may not really notice it, but in almost every scene is music.

The last thing I'd like to say is that the colors were...colorful. Maybe you want to make your movie a bit darker. That would make your movie a bit more horror-like, and you don't have to draw as much, as a part of it will be...dark.

Lumberjackdave responds:

Nice review ,,, thanks for the tip'S.

[The Girl and The Tree]

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You are a great director.
You used the sound right. You used the violence right.
The whole movie emitted the feeling it should.

If you feel you're not good at the graphics, you might want to work together with a friend who is good at it.
You are very promising.

Inspectorlee responds:

thanks for the comments, being a film major, i'm particularly honored

[The Mushroom War]

Nearly flawless.

Really. Everything just felt right about it.
Everything? Well, unfortunately, the vector images looked a bit out of place in the sprite world.
But hey, if the rest was awesome, who cares?

Trunks responds:

Yes, I admit that is a very bad downpoint of the flash. Anyways, I am really happy you reviewed this! I am even more happy for you to have said you liked it! Thanks a ton, I am honored to have you like this; you are one of the best flash artists ever. Period.
Thanks, you just made my day :D

[Black and White battle]

Nice : )

...Hellsing, Naruto, and do I detect a bit of FF?
But tell me, why do most FBF have to be black and white? Colours can make things look better. And a story would be nice.
Make more...more! (Talking in a agent Smith kind of way...)

NEO666x0 responds:

Simple my friend color is harder because you will paint on wrong layers and you will end up useing more MC then FBF unless your realy good.

[Drawing Contest #4 : Rage]

P4!

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The 4th contest? I missed 2 and 3. Thar's too bad, as they are all very good.
I gave the 6 for graph. because of the simplicity of the graphics, 6 for sounds, because they were good, but it needs a bit more effects (such as the scribbling sound when you're drawing). No violence, and a two because you included both Play and Replay buttons.
Maybe you should give the contestants more time to draw, so they can make colored pictures and stuff. And give them more different styles, because their drawing styles look too much alike.
Now I'm going to watch 2 and 3, so I'll be waiting for number 5 then.

ForestXion responds:

thanks
i'll try to improve it for round #5 ^^

[My Kung Fu]

It's okay...

This flash was a bit funny, not too bad, at least no bugs.
But I didn't really like the end. It's too violent (says someone who knows hundreds of ways to torture flash figures to death).
It's okay, but I think you can make better movies, right?

Slick responds:

Yeh, I guess i can make better movies. I'm just starting out really now though. Thanks for your comments

[.:FIERRAS:. Cartontown]

Original, well done.

It was a really good concept, but the end product could use someminor improvement. Maybe the colours should be a little clearer, as well as the sounds. The higher quality version does have clearer images, but the colours could still be improved, so it will be earier to look at. This might not be that good forthe unique colouring, though. For the Flash, you might want to go back to the play button, so it won't loop when the film ends.
I would like to see what happens after he lands on another side of the world. Please make a second part. Ga zo door!

Fierras responds:

we waren toen zeer beperkt in tijd en stiften :-)
Op het einde waren ze al bijna op en ik (julio) woon hier in een boerengat dus we konden niks anders doen dan improviseren :-)

Bedankt voor te replyen, hopenlijk tot de volgende keer.

[Dont GivePeople Weapons 3]

They die too quickly

Nice animation, nice style, and good violence. But I don't like it that they die instantly, they should die slower, suffer more, and do it again in slow-mo replay. Or will that be too violent?

AlterEgoZ777 responds:

probaly not to violent...i actually didnt mean for the movie to be so fast so i kno wut u mean...