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It doesn't look flashy enough...

I mean, that's what intro's are for right? All flashy and stuff, making you want to kill some bad guys? Okay, not for the My-Little-Pony games, but this doesnt seem to be one of those.

Give us something violent, action-filled, intense, erm...stuff. Maybe some more special effects or something like that.

Excellent movie!

This is how flash movies should be (or at least how I'd like them to be). It's a gentle movie, with beautiful graphics, and nice music. It's a work of art. There were only two things that slightly bothered me: sometimes, the detail is a bit too small, and you can't see it, which is a real shame. Also, the houses at the end didn't really seem to fit in.

I'm looking forward to seeing more like this.

Great!

This was another great movie, and I look forward to seeing part three...but wait...did you just say "this is a conclusion", as in ending?Noooo...
Anyway, your grandmothers basement sounds scary to me...

Original, well done.

It was a really good concept, but the end product could use someminor improvement. Maybe the colours should be a little clearer, as well as the sounds. The higher quality version does have clearer images, but the colours could still be improved, so it will be earier to look at. This might not be that good forthe unique colouring, though. For the Flash, you might want to go back to the play button, so it won't loop when the film ends.
I would like to see what happens after he lands on another side of the world. Please make a second part. Ga zo door!

Fierras responds:

we waren toen zeer beperkt in tijd en stiften :-)
Op het einde waren ze al bijna op en ik (julio) woon hier in een boerengat dus we konden niks anders doen dan improviseren :-)

Bedankt voor te replyen, hopenlijk tot de volgende keer.

Very good first flash

So, it's your first flash, and I'd say, it's far better thanthe average "My-first-flash". The basic flaws that everyone makes are there. If you can look through that, this is actually very good.

Slow and a sudden end.

It was slow, really slow. A common definition of action is fast movement, accompanied by mighty special effects. The effects are optional, though. The changing camera angles were okay, as was the combat (Try to make the fight snowball-increase the action over time). But then the movie suddenly stops. That's always a bad thing.

It shows promise

In some strange way, I think that, given the proper tools and time, you could become a professional. For now, focus on your drawing style. It should fit more with the images (Try practicing with the alpha of colors). Maybe you could try making a movie clip (it needs little story) for either experimental or trance music (it seems to fit your style).

Be sure to have a good time, ok?

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